This is really great work Eloise. It was good that you worked on your blog each day while you were in England as it means you could add a lot of detail about what you did, where you went and what you ate. The level of English is very high with almost no mistakes! I enjoyed reading about your work experience, it sounds like you were able to practice your English and I'm sure you learnt a lot from the job. You could perhaps revise the differences between "come in" vs "come to..." but generally you expressed yourself really well. Well done! - Maggie :)